Script Development & Mentoring with Paul Holbrook
Are you a screenwriter eager to elevate your script? Or a filmmaker with a burning idea, unsure how to shape it into a compelling story? Or an early career creative looking to understand and navigate a tricky landscape?
I’m here to help you bring your vision to life.
I’m Paul Holbrook, an award-winning writer and director from South Bristol. Over the past decade, I’ve written and directed numerous short films that have screened at top-tier, BAFTA and Oscar-qualifying festivals worldwide, and developed features and TV shows with established and emerging production companies and broadcasters. My work is known for its raw authenticity, gripping storytelling, and deeply human characters.
I know how tough, isolating, and sometimes overwhelming writing can be. Great scripts don’t just happen; they’re crafted, questioned, and refined. Whether you’re working on a short, a feature, or even just exploring ideas, I want to help make your story the strongest it can be.
I’m now offering one-to-one script development and mentoring sessions, tailored entirely to you and your project. Working 1-2-1 means:
✅ Personalised Feedback - Every story is unique. My notes and guidance will be specific to your voice, your style, and the goals for your script.
✅ Focused Attention - No generic advice or crowded workshops. You get dedicated time to dig into your script’s challenges and opportunities.
✅ Safe Space to Experiment - You can explore bold ideas and honest questions without fear of judgment.
✅ Practical Problem-Solving - We’ll identify story issues and work through concrete solutions together.
✅ Growth as a Writer - It’s not just about one script. It’s about building your craft, confidence, and creative instincts for future projects.
✅ Industry Insight - I’ll share what I’ve learned about festival strategy, market appeal, and navigating the UK and international film landscapes.
My approach is honest but supportive. I won’t just tell you what you want to hear. I’ll help you dig deeper, challenge yourself, and unlock the potential in your story. Whether you’re a first-time writer or an experienced filmmaker, I’ll meet you where you are and help you level up your storytelling.
Above all, I believe brilliant stories can come from anywhere, and that diverse voices deserve a place on the screen. If you’ve got a story that matters to you, I’d love to help you tell it brilliantly.
rates/PACKAGES
My one-to-one script development and mentoring sessions are £80 per hour for individual writers. I also offer discounted rates for students and emerging filmmakers, and tailored packages for longer-term support. Get in touch, and let’s chat about what works for your budget and project!
Script Read (<25 pages) + 1-hour Feedback Session - £100
Script Read (>25 pages) + 2-hour Feedback Session - £200
Script Read and 4-hour deep-dive session - £350
Ongoing Career Mentoring (five hour-long sessions) - £300
I’m excited to hear your story.